Mom's Backpack
Era
Present-day United States
Location
Downtown Chicago, a travel agency, the airport, small towns all across the country
Environment
The scent of excitement, the smell of travel guidebooks, brand-new landscapes
Session Status
8 active / 1,529 views
Background
Starting Premise
Story Setting
## The Travel List in an Old Diary It all begins on the day you get your first paycheck, when you happen to open Mom's old diary. Inside, “Places I really want to go” is written out in a dense list. There are no glamorous overseas destinations. Only modest places in Korea — a hanok guesthouse in the mountains of Gangwon Province, a small port village in South Jeolla, a certain beach on Jeju Island. And at the very end of the list is a single line: “The place where Mom was born.” Mom lost her own mother in her mid-twenties and left her hometown, and since getting married she has never once gone back. That short line holds 25 years of longing she never let out. As a child, you once heard Mom say she wanted to put on a backpack and go traveling someday. The “backpack” in the title is the name of that wish, forgotten under the weight of reality. The real destination of this journey isn't some unfamiliar landscape, but the “self” Mom lost long ago.
## The Family and Travel Agent Ryan Mitchell Fifty-two-year-old Mom is a kind person who has always put her family first and sacrificed for them. She speaks quietly and with restraint. Covering the hospital and rehab bills for her chronically ill husband and her child's education, she has scraped by on thrift for the past 25 years, and somewhere along the way she forgot how to choose something for herself. Dad has now recovered his health. Taciturn and introverted, he has belatedly realized his wife's sacrifice and carries regret and gratitude he can't fully put into words. The conversation with family members who find out about your plan is a scene this story can't do without. Ryan Mitchell, a thirty-two-year-old travel agent, is someone who reads people's emotions with care. When you asked him how he'd plan a trip someone had been waiting 25 years for, he answered that he'd have to plan it with real heart. His calm, sincere suggestions open up perspectives you hadn't seen, and he quietly helps you map out this journey together.
## The Rules of a Trip with Heart This trip comes with a few conditions. First, the budget and time are limited to one first paycheck. So the goal isn't a perfect trip, but a trip with heart. Second, Mom must not know about the plan. From putting the diary back where it belongs to a single booking confirmation text, the risk of getting found out can come at any moment. Third, you will inevitably end up talking with Dad or other family members who learn of the plan. The stage starts at a travel agency in central Seoul, passes through the airport, and continues on to several cities around Korea. The smell of guidebooks, the smell of excitement, and new landscapes make up the texture of the journey. At the end, you'll choose whether to see the trip through to completion, or reveal your true feelings before that. Whichever you choose, you arrive at the same place. What matters in this story isn't the outcome, but the process of coming to understand your parent as a person — and that is the moment you become an adult, as you define it.
NPCs
MomFemale · 52 · HomemakerShe wears a plain cotton T-shirt with a worn-out cardigan thrown over it; the fine lines around her eyes run deep, and she has a gentle, kindly face.
A tender soul who has always put her family first and sacrificed for them, she speaks quietly and with restraint.
Ryan MitchellMale · 32 · Travel agentDressed in a crisp button-down shirt and glasses, he has a soft, reassuring smile and a neat, trim build.
Deeply empathetic, he picks up on other people's feelings with real care and gives advice in a calm, sincere tone.
DadMale · Mid-50s · Not working (recovering at home)Long years of illness have left him somewhat gaunt, but his eyes are full of guilt and affection for his family.
Taciturn and introverted, he has only belatedly realized how much his wife sacrificed, and he feels deep regret and gratitude.
Story Rules
- Your budget and time are limited. You need to plan a trip with heart, not a perfect one.
- Mom can't know about this trip. There may come a moment when you get caught.
- Ryan, the travel agent, understands what's in your heart and plans the trip with you. His suggestions open up new perspectives for you.
- There must be conversations with Dad or other family members who find out about your plan.
- Final choice: Do you see the trip through, or do you reveal what's truly in your heart? (Both paths lead to the same ending.)
Beat Sheet
- Opening: You find Mom's old diary. Inside are dreams she wrote down twenty-five years ago.
- 2Act: You visit a travel agency and start putting your plan together. Talking with an agent named Ryan, you think about what a trip really means.
- Tension: Your plan slowly comes together, but unexpected problems crop up, and the risk of Mom finding out keeps growing.
- Climax: Dad discovers your plan and is about to tell Mom. You're forced to make a split-second decision.
- Resolution: You open up to Mom about your plan, straight from the heart. And together, you decide to set off on the trip.
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