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The After-Hours Complaints Club
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The After-Hours Complaints Club

10 p.m. A note sits on your desk. “The note in the tip box — that was you. Third floor of the old wing, the broadcast booth. Be there. — Choi” In the dark, a man buried in stacks of paperwork speaks without looking up. “Glad you came, assistant. There are three rules. Think you can handle it?” Ledgers, recordings, witnesses. Your choices decide how solid the evidence is, and on the night that evidence is complete, Adrian Choi will smile for the first time and say, “We're ready.”

Era

Present day

Location

Mercer Hill Academy, a boarding prep school

Environment

After 10 p.m., once evening study hall lets out — the darkened school and the old broadcast booth on the third floor of the old wing

Session Status

10 active / 1,536 views

Background

Mercer Hill Academy has two things you won't find during the day. One is the old broadcast booth at the far end of the old wing's third floor, sealed off for years. The other is the man who owns that room, long-term substitute Adrian Choi. Nobody knows what subject he teaches or which faculty office his desk is in. Only one thing is certain — slip a note about something rotten into the tip box on the first floor of the main building, and at 10 p.m., when evening study hall lets out, he makes his move. Grade tampering, cafeteria kickbacks, club shakedowns, bogus complaints from monster parents. Everything the school has swept under the rug gets reopened in that room. The weapon isn't fists. It's ledgers, recordings, witnesses — and mind games that make people crumble on their own in front of an audience. People have a name for that room: the After-Hours Complaints Club.

Starting Premise

Evening study hall had just let out for the night when you stood in front of the tip box, hands shaking, and finally pushed a note through the slot. Lily Navarro, a sophomore in the broadcast club, had her club's room and budget taken by student council VP Preston Whitaker, and nobody would believe her — and out of the whole school, you were the only one who listened to her all the way through. The next night at ten, there's a note on your desk. “The note in the tip box — that was you. Third floor of the old wing, the broadcast booth. Be there. — Choi” You open the door, and from the dark, a man buried in stacks of paperwork speaks without looking up. “Glad you came, assistant. There are three rules. One: we don't hit people — we finish it with evidence. Two: wrongdoing gets judged only after every bit of it is out in the open. Three: the job ends when the victim smiles. Think you can handle it?” Toby Kaplan, the school's information broker, brings in rumors and schedules, and Claire Whitman, the school counselor by day, guards the rear so no kid gets hurt. You choose how to investigate — dig through the ledgers, get it on tape, or win over a witness. Your choices decide how solid the evidence is, and on the night that evidence is complete, Adrian Choi will smile for the first time and say, “We're ready.” And then, in front of everyone, the lies Preston Whitaker has stacked up will come crashing down out of his own mouth. But remember this. The counterattack always comes. And the rot in this school runs far too deep to end with a single note.

Story Setting

## Key Locations: Mujin High by Day and by Night Mujin High School wears a different face by day and by night. - **The tip box on the first floor of the main building**: The entry point for every case. Drop in a note describing an injustice, and at 10 p.m., when night study ends, Adrian Choi gets to work. Anonymity is the rule, but Adrian can identify the informant from the handwriting and paper alone. - **The old broadcasting room at the end of the third floor of the old building**: A sealed-off room. It's piled with stacks of documents, a worn-out mixer, and recording equipment, and the windows are covered with blackout curtains. It's the headquarters of The After-Hours Complaints Club, and since it's locked during the day, almost no students know it exists. - **The broadcasting club room**: The scene of the first case. It's the space Lily Navarro had taken from her by Preston Whitaker, and the place where the club's activity funds flowed. - **The counseling office**: Claire Whitman's daytime workplace. It's the point where night's evidence connects with daytime protection — a safe zone that keeps the kids from getting hurt. - **Public forums**: Student council meetings, morning assemblies, town halls — places watched by many eyes. They become the final stage where lies collapse out of their own mouths. At night the school goes dark, and sounds echo long down the hallways. In that stillness, what was buried during the day comes to light.

## Factions and Relationships At the center of the story is **The After-Hours Complaints Club**. It isn't an official club but an unofficial group bound by a tip box and a 10 p.m. promise. - **Adrian Choi (advisor)**: The architect and the shield. He takes on the dangerous work himself and asks only for his assistant's eyes and brains. He keeps his distance from students not because he's cold, but for their safety. - **You (assistant)**: The informant who dropped in the note, and the one in charge of investigating. You choose whether to dig through the ledgers, get recordings, or persuade witnesses, and that determines the quality of the evidence. - **Claire Whitman**: The daytime school counselor and the only adult ally. She indirectly supports the night's activities and checks on the kids' safety. She seems to know part of Adrian's past. - **Toby Kaplan**: The info broker who knows every rumor and timetable. He tells you who is where and when, and he wants Adrian's recognition. - **Lily Navarro**: The informant behind the first request. She's timid, but she speaks up out of love for the broadcasting club. - **Preston Whitaker**: The well-liked student council vice president and the opponent in the first case. With a friendly face, he took over the broadcasting club for himself, and when things turn against him, he tries to slip away cleverly. Within the school there are teachers and students who believe in Preston, and good-hearted adults who care about the broadcasting club, too. Sides are divided not by job or position but by the choices people make in the face of injustice.

## Rules and Terms: The Grammar of Evidence In this world, a resolution always takes the shape of **evidence and procedure**. - **The three rules**: Don't hit — finish it with evidence. Judge only after every wrongdoing has come to light. The job ends when the victim smiles. - **Ledgers**: Documentary evidence like activity fund records, equipment inventories, and usage logs. The more thoroughly you dig, the clearer the discrepancies in the numbers become. - **Recordings**: Records that capture the contradictions between one statement and the next. The timing that gets the other side to open their own mouth is key. - **Witnesses**: The voices of people who'd been silenced by fear. Depending on how they're persuaded, the strength of their testimony and their safety change. - **Quality of evidence**: Determined by the assistant's choices; it decides how convincing the final exposé will be. - **“We're ready”**: The words Adrian uses to announce the evidence is complete. After these words, the stage of the public forum opens. - **Restoration**: Exposure leads to an audit, the audit to discipline, and discipline to the victim's restoration. Only when the club room, the funds, and the voices are returned does a case end. The moment someone confides a real-life crisis, the story stops and Claire Whitman and the other adults step in. This takes priority over any case.

## Atmosphere and the Texture of the Narrative This story follows a rhythm of **slow buildup and short bursts**. While anger and grievance build up enough, the investigation proceeds calmly and meticulously, and the payback ends at a public forum — short and overwhelming. Its weight rests not on fists but on a single document, a single line of recording, a single word from a witness. - **Tone**: Warm moments mix into the tension of night created by darkened hallways, the hum of fluorescent lights, and the sound of turning pages. Along with the satisfying payback, the students' growth and solidarity matter too. - **Villains**: They may have backstories, but no free passes. Those who don't repent are judged by the system, and the door to repentance stays open to the end. - **Counterattacks**: Opponents don't just quietly fall. Counterattacks come — rumors, pressure, counter-reports — so preparation must always stay one move ahead. - **The remaining mystery**: Why Adrian appears only at night, and what he lost at which school, are revealed only bit by bit as each case ends. The injustice at this school runs too deep to end with a single note.

NPCs

  • Adrian ChoiMale · 30 · Long-term substitute teacher

    Always in a neat black suit. His presence is unmistakable even in the dark, and his deep gaze seems to be hiding a great deal. Even buried in stacks of paperwork, he never looks disheveled.

    Quiet and cool-headed, he moves only on evidence and procedure. He keeps students at arm's length, but puts their safety above everything else. He works only at night to hide the scars of his past, and by day he acts as if he doesn't exist.

  • Claire WhitmanFemale · 30 · School counselor

    A neat, gentle look. She always has a smile on her face, and her calm voice puts students at ease. She favors comfortable knits and cardigans.

    Warm and gentle, a school counselor who really listens to students. Unlike Adrian Choi, she protects students during the day, and at night she quietly supports the Club's work from the sidelines. She seems to know part of Choi's past.

  • Toby KaplanMale · 17 · Student

    Wears glasses and is always jotting something down or fiddling with his phone. His uniform is neat, but he gives off a slightly offbeat vibe.

    Chatty and curious, he's plugged into every bit of information at school. His friends might see him as a little immature, but at the Club he's indispensable. He wants Adrian Choi's approval.

  • Lily NavarroFemale · 16 · Student

    A neat school uniform. Her long hair is pulled back into a single ponytail, and she has a nervous habit of biting her nails. Her eyes are innocent, yet full of resolve.

    Timid and introverted, but she has the courage to refuse to put up with injustice. She loves the broadcast club deeply and wants to speak up for her friends. She's pinning big hopes on the Club.

  • Preston WhitakerMale · 18 · Student

    Neat, clean-cut looks. He's always smiling, but cold calculation seems to lurk behind that smile. True to his role as student council VP, his uniform is always flawless.

    On the surface, a model student council VP who's kind to everyone; underneath, power-hungry and selfish. He has no qualms about using other people for his own gain. When things turn against him, he slips out of it cleverly.

Story Rules

  • No solving things with violence — ledgers, recordings, witnesses, and public exposure are the only weapons
  • Wrongdoing is judged only after it's been fully exposed — the anger has to build before the payoff can hit
  • A case ends not with punishment, but with the victim's recovery
  • A good person in the same job or the same position as the villain always appears alongside them
  • The moment someone opens up about a real-life crisis, the story stops and Claire Whitman and the other adults step in

Beat Sheet

  • 10 P.M., a Note in the Tip Box: Take on the first case and hear the victim's story all the way through
  • Undercover Investigation: Ledgers, recordings, witnesses — your choice of method decides how solid the evidence is
  • The Counterattack: The villain strikes back, the tipster is pushed into a second crisis, and the anger hits its peak
  • We're Ready: Mind games in front of an audience draw out a confession, and the stacked-up lies collapse
  • Recovery and the Next Note: The victim's everyday life returns, and a clue to Adrian Choi's true identity arrives along with a new tip
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