The Night the Comet Comes
Era
Present-day United States
Location
The stargazing lookout at Griffith Park in Los Angeles and outdoor spots around the city
Environment
The black of the night sky, the chill of a primitive telescope, unpredictable weather and the hope of a clear night
Session Status
7 active / 1,175 views
Background
Starting Premise
Story Setting
## The Griffith Park Lookout and the City at Night The setting is present-day Los Angeles. At its heart is the stargazing lookout up in Griffith Park; even with the city lights spread out below, on a clear night you can make out Saturn's rings, Jupiter's bands, and the craters of the Moon. This is where the crew sets up their gear and takes turns at the eyepiece. The story doesn't stay at the lookout. The city streets where you prep for the interview, the benches and rooftops where you pace while you wait—those outdoor spaces are part of the stage too. Daytime LA runs on schedules and efficiency; the hill at night runs on waiting. The two places sit in the same city, but time moves differently in each, and you go back and forth between them. The black of the night sky, the cold seeping into the metal tube, weather that could go clear or cloudy—those are the basic sensations here.
## The Crew and the People Around You You joined the stargazing club three months ago, carrying the 1978 German-made telescope you inherited from your grandfather. There are six members in all. The leader, Walter, is a 55-year-old retired astronomer who has been recording the sky since 1978 and keeps thirty years' worth of observation notebooks. A calm mentor, he'd rather ask you questions so you think for yourself than hand you the answer. The youngest, Tyler, is a 23-year-old grad student who analyzes cosmic dust. He talks about the wonders of the universe with pure enthusiasm and supports whatever you choose. People of different ages and circumstances all wear the same expression in front of the lens, and that's what holds this club together. On the other side is the interviewer, head of HR at the new company. Businesslike and cool-headed, but curious when he runs into unexpected values. The crew is ready to fully back your choice, while the interview offers you a different possibility. The two worlds aren't so much opposed as asking, each in its own way, who you are.
## The Rules and Terms of Comet Week Cola-Patella is a comet that comes back every twenty years. This time it makes its closest approach to Earth in a week, and then even your telescope will be able to see it. The crew coordinated schedules for a month, and within the viewing week each member picked their own night. The one you chose is Thursday night, with a 92% chance of clear skies. But Thursday is also the day of the interview that decides whether you get the new job. The results come out Friday. The forecast changes daily, so even 92% isn't a guarantee. Miss this chance, and the next viewing is twenty years away—not until you're sixty. This kind of uncertainty is nothing new to the crew. You can't control the sky, so you accept it and wait for what comes back. Walter quietly knows you might give up the viewing and choose the interview, but he doesn't let on. That the same star means something different depending on the age and circumstances of whoever's looking is the oldest belief in this world.
NPCs
Walter ChenMale · 55 · Retired astronomerKind eyes with faint lines around them, a lean build in a worn field jacket.
Speaks in a calm, accepting way, a mentor type who offers advice about breathing room in life and the order of the universe.
The InterviewerMale · Mid-40s · Head of HRNeatly slicked-back hair, horn-rimmed glasses, a sharply tailored dark navy suit.
Businesslike and coolly efficiency-minded in how he talks, but with a side that gets curious about unexpected values.
Tyler, the club's youngestMale · 23 · Grad studentRound horn-rimmed glasses, a baggy hoodie, a boyish face and a skinny frame.
Explains the wonders of the universe with eager, earnest enthusiasm, and genuinely roots for other people's choices.
Story Rules
- During the week the comet is visible, you have your Thursday and the other observers have the days they picked.
- You're waiting on the results of Thursday's interview—they come out on Friday.
- The weather forecast changes every day, and Thursday night's weather isn't certain.
- If you miss it, the next chance to see the comet is twenty years away.
- Walter quietly knows that you might give up the viewing for the new job.
Beat Sheet
- Opening: You get the news that the comet will be within viewing range in a week. You set your night for Thursday.
- 2Act: At the same time, you realize your interview is scheduled for the same day. The company said they'll share the results Friday morning.
- Tension: The closer the interview gets, the more you waver. If you go see the comet, you'll be up late and wiped out, and it could wreck how you show up for the interview.
- Climax: Thursday, 11 p.m., you climb up to Griffith Park. The sky is clear. Walter hands you the telescope. The comet slides into view.
- Resolution: Friday morning, you head to the interview. Whether the interviewer knows what you chose or not, you can't tell.
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